We compacted our narrative in to 20 bullet points as instructed by our teachers. We found that this enabled us to have a clear understanding of what we were filming. Doing this also prevented us from forgetting important parts of our narrative as the bullet points acted as cues
- (Present day)- in colour the opening scene shows female antagonist Emma in a therapy session with Dr Johnson. - Over the shoulder shot
- Flash back (camera sound / flicker of light transition) Sitting alone at lunch eating? (background sound – talking) -
- Emma runs to the bathroom – clenching fists. close up on bloody hands
- Paige enters the bathroom – friendly interactions
- Paige is at home (listening to music) phone alert – friend added on Snapchat (Emma) and accepts (evening).
- Next morning, Paige gets daily hot drink – goes to pay barrister says its already paid for by your friend – points. Emma watches from the corner (her POV)
- Emma turns and no one is there
- Go back to present in therapy with Dr Johnson Paige (what was going through your mind?) sitting there blank.
- Emma taking pictures (what of?)
- Pictures of Paige all over Emma walls (panning shot of room)
- At her desk putting x across Paige's friends and cutting herself out replacing with her face and sticks it on the wall.
- Dead body in the park/field
- Flowers on the door step / note (thinking of you x)
- Paige enters home (puts key in door)
- Unknown calls - picks up (Paige says hello/ who is this – no one answers)
- Text messages ( with images – sleeping)
- Paige enters home ( puts key in door)
- Emma looks at snap maps to find Paige's home.
- Emma breaks in to Paige's home through the back door – enters room and smelling t-shirts / lipstick smearing on lips/ while Paige is in the shower
- Paige enters (no one is there) gets ready for bed and cut to Emma lying under the bed (silent) - looking at the camera ('Para social' - glitch appears) - I just want to be your friend.

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